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Humor by Bestatte, Put in play by Caels. (its a classic!)

Well, I got in trouble again and had to write a 2,000 word essay about my hair being out of regs. I got bored and clueless so I asked Roberta to help me think of ways to waste space.

Essay


– The Importance of Proper Hair-length –


My name is Specialist Jessie Kellam Blair, and my purpose within the writing of this essay is to prove and validate the importance of maintaining the proper hair-length in accordance with the Army Regulation six-seventy dash one.
On Monday, day nineteen of the month of November, common era two-thousand one, my appearance in the first duty formation was said to be below standard in regards to the length of my hair. In accordance with Army Regulation, six-seventy dash one:

There are many hairstyles that are acceptable in the Army. So long as the soldier’s hair is kept in a neat, clean manner, the acceptability of the style will be judged solely by the criteria described below. Extreme or fad style haircuts or hairstyles are not authorized. If dyes, tints, or bleaches are used, colors used must be natural to human hair and not present an extreme appearance. Lines or designs will not be cut into the hair or scalp. Styles of hair and texture differ among the different ethnic groups and these differences affect the length and bulk of hair as well as the style worn by each soldier. Haircuts, without reference to style, will conform to the following standards.

The hair on top of the head will be neatly groomed. The length and bulk of the hair will not be excessive or present a ragged, unkempt, or extreme appearance. Hair will present a tapered appearance and when combed will not fall over the ears or eyebrows or touch the collar except for the closely cut hair at the back of the neck. The block cut fullness in the back is permitted in moderate degree as long as the tapered look is maintained. In all cases, the bulk or length of hair will not interfere with the normal wear of headgear or protective masks.

I fail to understand how my hair does not follow these regulations, except for maybe where it mentions a tapered appearance. If this is the case then I would like to know what a tapered appearance is, so that I might correct myself.
Now, I understand that I often tend to get angry when I write these stupid essays, so I, with the help of my friend Roberta, have come up with something humorous to throw in, just to waste space, because I cannot figure out how to say two thousand words worth over this small of a debacle. Remember, this is all in humor, and is not intended taken seriously in any manner.

I must follow regulations on hair length because the regulations say I do. Other than that, the only thing I have to add to this essay is that my NCO is an anal retentive [arse] who needs more bran in his/her diet. In addition, I feel that I should be given a direct and public apology by the NCO for his/her inappropriate behavior toward me, including but not limited to touching me in private places, kissing my ear while letting people think he/she was whispering, and fondling him-/herself while I was forced to watch with the infrared binoculars late at night last Thursday, thus depriving me of the sleep required in order to do my duty.
Furthermore, I have dyed my pubic hairs blonde, since there is no regulation against it, and I paint my toenails a lovely shade of mauve, except for the right pinky toe, since my NCO seems to have a fetish for that and the bindi in my navel.
There is no regulation forbidding the use of urine as a hair conditioner. There is no regulation forbidding fornication with sheep. There is no regulation forbidding cunnilingus on a female cat. There is no regulation forbidding sticking one's fingers in the blender in the mess hall and pushing the "pulverize" button. There is no regulation against blowing one's nose in the stew.
I feel, taking this gross lack of regulatory supervision of such obscene and vulgar practices into consideration, that the infraction concerning the shaving of one's head at a regularly scheduled interval is so completely inane, unimportant, and trite, that the Military should be ashamed of even including it in their blessed regulations in the first place.
In addition, while we're on the topic of regulations, I challenge you to quote me the exact article, paragraph, and line of the regulation regarding toenail length. I have searched the entire volume and have yet to find it. If it doesn't exist, I will be growing my toenails to a minimum of two inches beyond the toe, thus causing injury to my feet and warranting a reclassification to 04F.
My non-commissioned officer, remaining anonymous for obvious reasons, has halitosis and his/her very breath is personally offensive. I demand that s/he see the company physician and have it removed.
I would also like to see Twinkies added to Tuesday dinners instead of that slush you call Jell-O, and a nice cabernet would really help morale.
Roberta is still speaking in my head. She is a Necromancer and is threatening to leave me to rot next time she walks by my corpse. She is ordering you, with me as a channel, to do as I request and to remove any past and current offenses off my record. If you do not comply, she will inflict such pain as to cause you to beg her for death.

She offers a sample of her sense of justice, as follows:

Roberta casts at a prismatic wisp with Wave of Darkness!
Critical Success!
Biting frost to body!
Roberta’s assault renders it incapacitated!
A prismatic wisp shrinks for a moment, glowing white-hot. An instant later it explodes in a shower of bursting prismatic lights, blinding you!

I am now restraining from repeating her favorite number, seven, 1007 times, since she is chanting it over and over in the dreary blackness of my mind.
She's really a very nice lady once she takes her eyeballs out. Her eyeballs are her path to power, you see, and with them she is the Goddess Kasira's evil and dark minion. She takes them out sometimes and lets me eat them. They taste a little like that fake chocolate stuff called carob.
Once when I was seven years old (did I mention seven is Roberta's favorite number?) she came to me in my sleep as usual, and rolled her eyeballs over my naked body under the covers. It was really fun. Then I woke up and my mommy came in and gave me a lollipop. I think I like the eyeballs better.
Mommy wore army boots, just like my commanding officer. Do you think the CO will let me call him mommy?
In summary, one must shave one's head as is appropriate according to the regulations (and include the regulation number), because any instance of disobedience toward the rules, and toward one's Commanding Officer can be construed as a minor mutiny, a rebellion, and the person committing such an offense, no matter how trivial it might seem, would be untrustworthy to his peers and to his superiors.

Love and kisses,
Specialist (soon to be Private First Class) Caels.

Post signature – Roberta made me say that; she’s evil
and she talks to me in my sleep.

Okay… I think that is enough from my friend. Where was I? Oh yeah.

I felt that, for once, you poor non-commissioned officers would like to hear some humor instead of my constant sarcasm and bitching. And in lieu of this essay, I shall try to maintain the standards set forth (though not the standards prescribed by Roberta) and never again shall you need to tell me to cut my hair. Once again though, I do wish to know what a tapered appearance is so that I might be within the previously stated regulations, in accordance with Army Regulation six-seventy dash one.
I hope you have enjoyed your tour of my wonderful psyche, and recall that it was purely for humor, and for wasting space on the page. Nothing stated above within the confines of italics and humor is relevant to any real life situation involving me, not involving any of the non-commissioned officers within the unit (hopefully).

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Caels Onae'Rae
AIM : Lord Caels

Emails:
caels_onaerae@hotmail.com
caels@gsplayers.com

[Edited by request for vulgarity]

[This message has been edited by Caels (edited 11-19-2001).] reg

I think that is rather funny. Thats what you get for listening to that witch who like to hypnotize men with her crazy colored eyes and sharp teeth. Reminds me of my grandmamama.

But you are seriously sending that to the military? I couldn't imagine that. I would laugh my butt off when I read that I would have no clue what to do. Is the army just not taken the seriously.

Lord Deprav reg

<< But you are seriously sending that to the military? I couldn't imagine that. I would laugh my butt off when I read that I would have no clue what to do. Is the army just not taken the seriously. >>

I know here that would be a fine of 300 bucks for having hair that touches your ear, and the essay would most likely lead to jail time.

It's funny and all but I seriously hope you're CO isn't strict. That essay will go on your record.

- Lord Kranar, human Archwizard reg

I'm at the point now with this unit that I don't care if I get fined, and the record thing doesn't matter since this is my last duty station till I get out.

I get in trouble for the most pointless stuff all the time and I hate everything about this place. The only reason I don't flat out go AWOL or get myself chaptered is because it would take forever and I need to go home and see my girl this weekend and over Christmas. Right now, she is all that matters to me, and she is the only reason I have not completely snapped and started murdering my NCO's.

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Caels Onae'Rae
AIM : Lord Caels

Emails:
caels_onaerae@hotmail.com
caels@gsplayers.com reg

http://us.imdb.com/Title?0093058 reg
Um one part of your letter bothers me the acts with the cat, there is something that catches that it is called the USMJ which all military branches must comply with. There is an article that covers sodomy and anyother lasivious sexual act so you are caught there. Must be nice to have such hair regs though. Also putting your finger in a blender and shredding it, thats destruction of government property( which you are ) and you can and will be charged for intentional acts of that. I know it was ment to be a joke but remember they can pull your punk card on those details with ease

[This message has been edited by AnticorRifling (edited 11-21-2001).] reg

News flash!

Turned in the paper, had to read it aloud in front of my entire platoon, pissed off the NCO, and managed to get myself recommended for demotion twice. As I said before, I don't care anymore. And I told the Chaplains assistant that I just had to get away from here... He made my swear that I wouldn't kill myself or go AWOL this weekend, so since my honor is all I have left, I'll be back on Sunday.

See you all again soon. Roberta, thanks for the entertainment, (shoulda seen the looks I got while reading that one out loud, you'da loved it )

And I know all that, Anticor, Roberta wrote 9/10 of that. I had to leave most of it the same to make it humorous.

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Caels Onae'Rae
AIM : Lord Caels

Emails:
caels_onaerae@hotmail.com
caels@gsplayers.com reg

I think I woulda burst out laughing my butt off if I was in the platoon and heard it. I know I was doing just that writing it.

As for the sticking fingers in the blender thing, as long as it doesn't cause damage to the blender I think he'd be fine on that point. And does the chapter on laviscious acts pertain to all living creatures? I mean, does it specify that? If not, then he could get off on a technicality, since it's presumed the chapter would refer to other human beings.

Only recommended for a demotion eh? I'm disappointed. I was sure you'd get recommended for a court martial. But at least the Chaplain thought you were worth a lecture on suicide. Makes ya feel good knowing god's on your side don't it?

:grin:

Hugs to ya Caels!

R
reg

Nervousness overcame my laughing need. That and the NCO makin me stop in the first part of the funny stuff. For the newest details, I am gonna go ahead and go with what I started, and I'm gonna use this to either get a bad conduct discharge, or a mental discharge, I don't care whichever, I just have to get away.

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Caels Onae'Rae
AIM : Lord Caels

Emails:
caels_onaerae@hotmail.com
caels@gsplayers.com reg

Caels,

I have talked to you before. Please reconsider all of this. There is time most likely to get this all taken care of.

Let someone know your problems and show a willingness to turn it around.

A dishonorable discharge will follow you in life for a long long time. I know you are young and I know I did some foolish things when in love. Just don't burn any bridges, especially those that follow you around for a long time.

The military is a great springboard into a great civilian career. Corporations look to the military backgrounds as signs of stability and discipline to get things done. Don't take that away from yourself.

Hiway (Major USAF ANG) reg

I'm going to second Hiway here. reg
I spoke with my commander today. The punishment is that I am to lose one rank and $350 out of my next pay check. It went over rather smoothly, which put me in a much better mood than I was in. And I am no longer going for the bad conduct discharge. I did ask my commander however to help me get out, and he said he will try to get me out as quickly as possible, while avoiding the worst ways. He actually told me he might be able to get me an honorable discharge if I stay out of trouble while the paperwork goes through, so that is what I am counting on now. He also suggested that I should think about a career in writing, he didn't believe me when I told him Roberta was a real person... he kept calling her my imaginary friend. Here is what I wrote today, which was what he commented on about the writing thing.

Emptiness abounds my lifeless body as I trudge around this maddening place... sick of fighting for something I do not have, freedom... I stand alone in this dreary darkness and count the days as my pain increases with each beat of my heart, and shreds my soul to pieces.

As day draws nigh and my dreams give way to a shattered reality, I cringe in disgust, as thick bile threatens to overcome my willpower, as I resist the urge to vomite myself into oblivion. Oblivion... a word so sweet and tempting in my world of wretched loathing, yet I dare not leave my love behind.

My queen calls unto my heart, as my mind pulls two ways at once. One way in favor of my heart, the other in disgust of life and the desire to simply hide away and die.

Blinded by the light of love and embracing the radiant warmth of freedom, I stagger along this torturous trail in hopes of finding the source, and comforting my soul.

Until such time, I continue to grope about, searching for any exit from this desolate prison. A prison of my mind, built to hide me from the most harsh of all places or states of being, the deserted wasteland of reality.

A reality swarming with unimaginable creatures, vile and horrible in many ways, while offering up a facade of humanity. The charade is endless as these despicable daemons draw the life from one another in a neverending struggle for power and domination over all creatures, be they greater or not.

Many might consider me upon the edge of insanity, though none can refute my logic. For now I suffer of tunnel-vision, and the only tunnel I see leads me far from this horrid place. If the end justifies the means, then there is much I would sacrifice to reach the end of my tunnel, and I would sacrifice all all would it reap my goal more quickly.

Life means nothing without love, and my love is gone. Therefore, life is nothing to me, as mine is likely little unto others. While I do not wish death, it looms sweeter in my mind with each passing day, leaving a bitter taste upon my lips and an attractive aroma that calls me forth.

A symphony play on in my mind; A sweet chorus of temptations that leads me away form this place and harkens me into the endless depths of impervious shadow; my soul seeking refuge in its cooling and still blackness.

Perhaps stating that my love is gone is an overstatement. To more effect, perhaps it is better described as thus: My love is given, and not returned, separated from its target by a wall... A wall that I liken to the Army, to which I now put a hammer to, in an effort to break it down, and as it cracks, my efforts increase and I pour my soul into it, until there is nothing more that stands between my empress and me.

For now that wall remains, and I tire as nothing happens after striking again and again. Feeling like a caged animal, I recoil and wait, my rage and sorrow focus into myself, where I store them for the final blow. I feel the time for that last strike is near, and I rebuild my walls to defend against the debris from the shattering blow.

I am sick of not being able to be myself. I have hidden myself away and bowed unto others for too long. I am repulsed by what I have been forced to become, as I believe no man can function solely as servant, As I slowly stand once more, I cast away the ties of service, so that I might find happiness and sound mind as a free man. At this point, I care nothing at all about how that freedom is obtained.

Well... that's about it... if its a bit confusing blame it on the fact that I was trying to write thoughts more than something to be read by others. I keep most of the stuff I write just to look back and see myself from a different perspective later in life.

Anyhow, I thank you for the concern, Hiway and Gnomad, but I think that if I apply myself for a little while I can get out of this favorably. I certainly will try.

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Caels Onae'Rae
AIM : Lord Caels

Emails:
caels_onaerae@hotmail.com
caels@gsplayers.com reg

I'll throw in my say just for redundancy. Definitely try to get out of the military 'the right way.' If you end up getting a dishonorable discharge or mental one, you'll most likely have much regret from the day you WOULD have gotten out legitmately onward. I've made that mistake with things before, albeit, none that really mattered, but I know the feeling.

Sonic reg

Great prose Caels! You should spend more time in Inferno where you can harness all that creativity and go nuts roleplaying. That should keep you out of trouble while allowing you a vent while you work on being the good soldier

R
reg

Well, in actuality, Inferno and GemStone keep me away from my duties, and cause more of a problem... In short, I start playing, and don't want to stop, then I don't do things like... cut my hair... or shine my boots... or iron my uniform... lotsa little stuffs that I just don't do once I start playing. But lately I haven't been playing, and I been trying to figure out a good schedule and soon will be working on a new budget too since my paycheck is about to drop $200 a month...

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Caels Onae'Rae
AIM : Lord Caels

Emails:
caels_onaerae@hotmail.com
caels@gsplayers.com reg

Well... its been a week and no mention of my demotion yet... still a specialist... still wanting out.

One good thing has happened though. I was transferred from my platoon into the HQ platoon, and I get along with everyone there great. Perhaps my commander is trying to give me another chance to redeem myself, by taking me away from those I hate... Or... perhaps he put me there because I am useless to the other platoon if I don't want to be there and refuse to work with them, and is planning on getting me out sooner by moving me around.

*shrugs* Either way is fine for me right now. I'll keep ye all updated as time drags on.

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Caels Onae'Rae
AIM : Lord Caels

Emails:
caels_onaerae@hotmail.com
caels@gsplayers.com reg

Demoted today... going to JAG tomorrow, Open Hearing on Friday.

I have no defense because the Constitution does not apply to soldiers. I already suggested invasion of privacy, freedom of speech, and a few more similar things. I already know none of them will work, and I am not in the best state of mind to be getting the shaft in the next couple of days... I'll let you all know what's going on.

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Caels Onae'Rae
AIM : Lord Caels

Emails:
caels_onaerae@hotmail.com
caels@gsplayers.com reg

<<I have no defense because the Constitution does not apply to soldiers. I already suggested invasion of privacy, freedom of speech, and a few more similar things. I already know none of them will work, and I am not in the best state of mind to be getting the shaft in the next couple of days... I'll let you all know what's going on.>>

You as a memeber of the armed service of the United States of America, agree to defend the Constitution of the United States of America against all enemies forieng and domestic. Never did you agree to fall under the protection of said name document.

Invasion of Privacy: What privacy? All things that are issued to you or remain in a domicle that is owned by the govenment is subject to search at anytime. Anything that is not issued is considered a liberty and can be revoked at the Commanding Officer's discrestion. Your hair is not private property you are a GI Government Issue, there for you will maintain a standard as directed by whatever order governs such things in your branch of service, but ultimatly is CO's call again.

Freedom of speech: You dont get that, if you had the ability to freely speak your mind towards a supeior officer or anyone of higher rank and or billet the military would not function in a "Military fashion." That is to say we would not be able to carry out our mission in a quick and efficent manner if we had to deal with back talking and second guessing all the time. Instant willing obediance to orders!

I believe in these things, all ways have, all ways will. I am not slapping you in the face with this I just want to prepare you for what is coming in the event you try to use these excuses in your hearing. Best bet in my opinion, prove that you were in fact singled out and other individuals of similar rank and billet did not conform to the regulations that you are being slapped with. If you can show that you did in fact get singled out well that is called hazing. You use the word hazing and officers will cringe..promotions tend to ice with hazing, or sexual harrasment on the record. Or you could try simply stating
"This soldier understands that his/her actions happened to be wrong. I was merely trying to state that I felt the punishment did not fit the "crime/infringment" Never was my intent to slander and or disrespect those indiviuals reading my paper. I felt that the paper was a forum for this soldier to vent. If this soldier's understanding of the paper was false then this soldier is ready to recieve such punishment that is handed down by the court/JAG/NJP/Court Martial/etc."

Best of luck to you.

Anticor Rifling, Giantman Wizard

Strength and Honor!
reg

"It is this soldier's opinion that this soldier must say "this soldier" far too often for this soldier's taste!"


oh nooooo, but oh yes...

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I got no dukes. reg

Well said Anticor.

All I can say is sometimes we have to sacrifice a little bit when we are young to insure the freedom we can use later.

Yes, it is a small sacrifice. I was hoping you understood what you were getting into when you signed up and took that oath. In the big picture the time frame you committed to is very very short.

Believe me, you will actually look back at all of this down the road when older and regret it. I have never met anyone who wasn't lieing to themself stating otherwise.

Hiway reg

Man that essay was almost as funny as signing up to die for a country that doesn't give a damn about you or your rights. reg
Is it also perhaps almost as funny as hearing someone who obviously doesn't know much of anything spout off like some neo-hippie when he really has no idea what he is talking about?

Sonic reg

I bent over and took it quietly. I spoke no defense because I was already promised that the commander would help me get out, and do so in as good a discharge as possible, and therfore I didn't want to bring any more BS down on myself. The commander went very lenient on me with my second punishment... not only did I get demoted, but I also got another article 15 - and the punishment was suspension of my rank and only 5 days of extra duty.

quote:
You as a memeber of the armed service of the United States of America, agree to defend the Constitution of the United States of America against all enemies forieng and domestic. Never did you agree to fall under the protection of said name document.

Invasion of Privacy: What privacy? All things that are issued to you or remain in a domicle that is owned by the govenment is subject to search at anytime. Anything that is not issued is considered a liberty and can be revoked at the Commanding Officer's discrestion. Your hair is not private property you are a GI Government Issue, there for you will maintain a standard as directed by whatever order governs such things in your branch of service, but ultimatly is CO's call again.

Freedom of speech: You dont get that, if you had the ability to freely speak your mind towards a supeior officer or anyone of higher rank and or billet the military would not function in a "Military fashion." That is to say we would not be able to carry out our mission in a quick and efficent manner if we had to deal with back talking and second guessing all the time. Instant willing obediance to orders!


I should retain the rights set forth by the Constitution in that I am still a living, breathing, and working citizen of the United States.

The invasion of privacy was not in reference to the haircut, it was in reference to forcing me to read aloud to those outside of the incident the writing stated above. And the government did not issue me, despite what GI means. I am still a person, and that is why I fight to get out. The military is not for me because I will not bow down and be nothing more than a mindless zombie. One of the most annoying things in the military to me is that everyday I hear things like, "Use your head" or references to such, yet flip the coin over and I hear this everyday as well, "You aren't paid to think about what you do, just do it." If they want soldiers to use their heads, then allow them to use their heads at all times. If they want obedient and mindless soldiers then train them to be that way.

And I do have the right to speak freely and openly about anything I wish, and I spit on those who would tell me otherwise. I am willing to face the consequences of such actions, as I am doing now, but never will I let my superiors break me over simple human rights. Human rights. Never will I bow down and say I'm sorry, for I am not, and it was their choice, not mine, to view my essay as contempt. I explained my position to them, I have taken the blow, and now I stand even stronger in my resolve, though now I choose to remain silent so that I do not hinder my expulsion from the military.

All in all, this is going in every favor for me, more so than I had hoped. I have no reason to be bitter about losing my rank, and I hold no grudge against those who vied for it. I am winning in my own way. I did not care about the rank, because I never felt I had earned it in the first place. No grudge do I hold for this was just another step that took me much closer to what I wanted in the first place, to get out, and besides that, I am also working in a completely different section now, which removed me from the NCO that does hold a grudge against me (and yes, I have proof of that).

Say what you wish about what you think I should be, and how you think I should act, for you are quite entitled to your opinion, as I am to mine, despite what the military prescribes. I stand in defiance because it is time for me to move on and get my life going in another direction.

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Caels Onae'Rae
AIM : Lord Caels

Emails:
caels_onaerae@hotmail.com
caels@gsplayers.com reg

Fralcon: When speaking to an officer or enlisted of higher rank it is consider proper, not required, to speak in the third person. When, not if but when trust me I get it alot, I am repremanded for having a brain fart I will say this Marine thought this that and the other, more often than not the officer/senior enlisted will say stop that. But I see your point it is a bit over board

Hiway: I agree totaly I signed up nowing this and I still love doing what I do.

I think Im dead: Think that as you like, you are entitled to your opinion, I have never gone hungry and I made this a choice because I care about this nation. It is this mentality that keeps America as it is, not opinions of yours. Ahh they are bombing us I should retaliate but whats in it for me? Not the attitude that changes the world but hey you can have it if you wish.

Caels: I see your point you should retain these rights, but sacrifes have to be made, you cannot and will not function as a military unit if you have to worry about hurting someones feelings rather than worrying about the mission at hand. Mission accomplishment then troop welfare, that is how it always has been and thats the way it will always will be. Could you imagine going to war and saying excuse me Gunny you can't tell me to charge the hill I dont feel like it.

Glad they didn't reem you as bad as they could. Keep your head up and keep marching.

Anticor Rifling, Giantman Wizard reg

Caels, dear, you are messed up.

~ YOU know me as the Lady Celeri. reg